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Designing the Snipe-shooter by Gaboris Designing the Snipe-shooter by Gaboris
So here is my second design sketch dump or whatnot. X3

At the top it's also a test made on the train. It started out as a "normal" sniper rifel.
After a few thoughts I remade the whole thing for it to fit more into a stretched out arm.
At the bottom that's not a robot arm (I couldn't fix it well enough to make it look different XP). That's a kind of rail in witch the stock of the gun is fixed and keeps it in place when it's in it's collapsed form.
Had some probs with the stock connection itself. There are three forms I thought up right above the arm, pls take a closer look and tell me your thoughts witch would fit more. :)

Other designs:
Shooter:[link]
Forcer:[link]
Former:[link]

P.S.: Wanna know what that thing is on the characters torso? HAH! That's the subjekt of a later work. >:3
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RaaSet Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
Hű, ez tetszik - különösen az a puska a körreel meg az íves áramvonaélas tervezéssel a puska tusnál (remélem jó kifejezés XD; )
Bejön a páncél forma-tervezése is, illik a puskához. :3 Tök jók a kis részletek, kár, hogy semmit nem értek belőle, nem az én világom. ^//^'
Szóval ez valami sztori része? :3

Oh, csak annyit, hogy értem, hogy a négyzetrácsos papr megkönnyíti a dolgod a tervezésben, de akkor nem háznád ki valamilyen filccel a végén mondjuk, hogy tisztábban elkülönüljenek a vonalak? Tudom, ez az én hülyeségem, csak ez a szkennelés elég sötét. Próbáltál valami "Brightness/Contrast" effektet? Nem tudom Gimppel lehet-e ilyesmit, vagy van-e más programod ehhez. Néha sokat dob rajta, ha kikontrasztosítod. ^^
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
Igen az egy olyasmi üreges csukló rész, a súly csökkentéséhez ahol tudtam kivágtam a tömör részeket csak így 2D-ben nehezen felismerhető. :)
Ezek a részletel még semmik a rendeshez, csak kevés érzékem van hozzá és nehezen jön az ihlet a textúrákhoz. >_<"
Jaja, egy tervezett játékom egyik karakterének a felszereléséhez tartozik, de még hosszú az út mire a kész figurát össze tudom állítani. Épp mostanság dolgozok a felszerelések és karakterek fejlődési rendszerén szóval még eltart. X) De amúgy a játék megvalósítása előtt egy kis bemutató sorozatot tervezek az alap történettel, hogy meglássam mik a visszajelzések hozzá. :)

Igen ismerem a tollal/filccel meghúzott vonalakat a kiemeléshez, de annyira még nem vagyok jó, hogy egyenesen meghúzhasam a vonalakat. XP
Főleg az a gond, hogy telefonnal fényképeztem, mer nincs szkenner. X)
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RaaSet Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2010
Értem. :)

Hát ezzel tudok azonosulni. Többnyire keresek valami lapot textúrákhoz a neten, különben nagyon gyatra lesz. >,<

Értem, sok sikert hozzá! ^w^

Haha, erre való a vonalzó - az ilyen dolgokhoz szerintem kell is. ^^
Oh értem. Az gáz, ismerem a témát. =/

Bocs a kései válaszért..sok szomrú dolog történt közben idehaza. u__u
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010
Sosem fogom megérteni egyes ismerőseim honnan szedik azokat ez elképesztő textúra ötleteiket, de talán maj egyszer beletanulok magam is. X)

Köszi, kicsit akadozva, de már halad a tervezés. :D

Na jah az is egy másik kérdés, van pár vonalzóm, de ugye az általánosbeli rajzórákról szóval lehet gondolni, hogy milyenek. XP
Idővel maj beszerzek egy szkennert, de amíg nincs rá igazi okom nem verem magam költségekbe. :)

Semmi gond megértem, mennyire komoly dolgok ha nem vagyok tapintatlan a kérdésemmel.
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RaaSet Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
Haha émn is ezt remélem XD

Oké :3

Haha vonalzót érdemes beszerezni (meg körzőt, valami jobbat) de megértem a szkenner dolgot. Nehéz jót találni. És a jó alatt nem is a színhelyességet értem, de hogy egyáltalán a CERUZÁT elvigye. Legtöbbnél lehetetlen beéllítani, hogy a halvány vonalak látszanak. =(

Hát..elég komoly...édesanyám. meghalt.
És közben más problémák is vannak (munkahely, egésszégügyi, pénzügyi, magánéleti). Szóval ilyesmi. ^^;

Továbbá szeretnék kívánni BOLDOG(ABB) ÚJ ESZTENDŐT mint amilyen tavaly volt! :)
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
Akkor csak kitartás mindkettőnknek nem igaz? ;)

Na jah, gondolkoztam azokon a T formájú vonalzókon mert ezeket sehogy sem tudom vízszintesbe hozni. XP Hát igen még a minőséget is figyelhetem, akkor tényleg várnom kell. Előbb egy tablet-be gondolkozom, de lehet nem lesz belőle sok. Most karácsonykor bátyám megkérdezte van-e ÖTLETEM, hogy mit szeretnék és amikor megemlítettem neki a tabletet csak azt kérdezte "Minek az neked?" szóval maj meglátom mi lesz vele.

Oh... Részvétem és kívánom, hogy oldódjanak meg a problémáitok minél előbb.
Viszont kívánok Boldog(gabb) újévet mindannyiótoknak. :)
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Taicon Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
So after musing over it for a few minutes it seems like you have a kind of a shoulder weapon mounting platform. The biggest reason i can see that a set of gears would need to be added is to lift the bulk of larger weaponry that might be attached. Another reason might be that it may assist in the process of holding any type of gun straight ahead so there isn't any sway. The chest piece sort of reminds me of the chest-piece i have on one of my other commissions, save for the fact that it doesn't look like it is able to move. I would guess it is either a power generator of some design, or some sort of hypnosis device.
There are a few X's and checks, with a few question marks as well, im not able to discern if that means you're not sure if its a keeper, if its no good or good. A key of reference might be good for another version when you develop in the future.
Personally I like waiting until someone comments about it so i can strike up a convo and describe away.
Being a little of a tech junkie I like writing about how things work, and then discussing it :3
Im sure were going to have quite the armor suit when this is done.
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
Sorry for not replying for so long man, but I'm takin my rest with the others at an aquapark for a few days and they're too hung up on leavin after THEY're done with the net that I didn' have time to write such a long comment. XP

So to the point I KNEW ye're the man to ask for thoughts. I just love it if someone starts bringin up ideas aboot my stuff. :3
Okay lemme run through the points:
Okay so the gear system... yeah it's a weapon mount platform, but this is only for this sniper rifle kind of gear since all weapons have a different type of platform and placing.
So kay to understand why are there platforms like these connected to all the equipments I'll tell that all of them are passive. So none of them has any functioning or active parts other then the gears and slides for the collapsed forms. They fire an energy based plasma/emp shot witch is collected in the weapons "hull" that releases the energy once it is full.
Now my point is that the gears are only mechanical "holders" since the equipment can't loose contact with the armor itself, but this is for a later design to tell. :3 If ya look at the lower pics you can see that is serves to hold the collapsed form of the gun on the back.
You're almost right about the torso "armor"'s function. That's basically the only "working" part since the "Frontal Module" is a type of gate that holds a special portal, but I'll explain that later. It's not a generator itself, the energy source is a battery from witch the "FM" distributes the energy and refills it using thermal energy(again later) when on standby.

Yeah sorry didn' think aboot that part, but it's basically just that X's are the failed and dropped designs ?'s are the parts I'm thinking about how to make or witch to use and I bet checks are obvious now. :3
So if ya take a look at the types of "connectors" (the middle ? with three arrows) I'm not sure witch one to use, but the first or middle pieces are the best in my opinion. What do ya think?

At this level it's just a collection of gears, the first pieces of armor only come on the second level and they'll be finalized on the third. But you'll see what I mean later. :)

Sorry for makin such a huge comment, but I just can't keep myself back when it comes to explaining my ideas even if I can't do it normally. XP
Still I hope you'll understand and still talk with me about this. ;)
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Taicon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
Sure thing :3 Networking ideas is always a great way to fuel the creative juices ^_^
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
Great to hear that then. X3
So you'd have any new thoughts on my things? :3
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aprilblenk Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010
Nice work mate! Ha Ha! I like the question mark with the arm.. Helmet thing? :XD:
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010
Hehe every time I see that mate I giggle inside (Cuz of the australian thing not the nasty one. X3).
The connection between the guns stock and the rail on the shoulder. I'd need some help on that end part witch to use and such. X)
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aprilblenk Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010
I see! Sounds cool! You should use the design for an Oc you have made or could make! ^^
lol! Don't worry about it! Aussie Rulz!
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
Yeah that's my plan, but first I need to find out how his gear should look like and practice by doing some of these bit more square stuff objects before goin for the human body itself. :3
Yeah I love it myself. Ya like the Land Down Under song from Men at work? :D
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aprilblenk Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
lol! Yea I know it! When I was in Primary school that was one of the main songs we used to sing! XD
So you're from Hungary!? Oh WOW! What's it like up there?
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010
Hehe I just love the australian accent, it's just funny (not in a bad way so don' be mad). X3
When I first heard that song I was listening to it for days. :D

Yeah in the "heart of Europe" as they say, but I'm not so sure about that. >.< Well it's kinda boring since I'm the sit at home and do nothing by myself kinda guy and other then being at school I don' do much. Sometimes I go out with some friends of course, but everyone does that around the globe right? X3
Other than this it's typical west culture and urban life all around. Got some wierd stuff going in politics, but at least there are alot of new constructions going along cuz of the EU. :)
But really how about there in the big down unde? The outback must be a way more interesting place then ours(IF you were at the outback, don' wanna be stereotypical. >.<).
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aprilblenk Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
Ha ha! Don't worry about it! XD
I live in Victoria of Australia and I love it here. I live about 5 minutes away from the beach so I walk there with my friends through the bush walk. I love the walk to the beach and it just gets better when you get there to go have a swim in the water! I also love going to Melbourne! It is about a 3 hour drive (so boring but worth it) and I mainly go to see the footy with my dad. Football in Australia is not like American Foot ball or Soccer, Completely different game indeed. Anyway I really love Melbourne at night! WOW it is so beautiful! Gotta love it! It is great here at the moment where I am sitting from! The stars are looking amazing!O.O
...Oh yea also yesterday I saw a brown snake! But I’m alive! XD
One of my best friends is British (English) and has stayed here for about 4 years and still has her accent. She always tell me a lot about England, sounds a lot different to Australia but still sound brilliant! When I am older I want to travel more to see other countries. Bugger Sorry! I talk way to much! ^^;
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Gaboris Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Then I'm cool. X3
Yeah the beach is great if ya can go any time ya want to. I spent the last 5 summers working there and never really went swimming, but still. X) It takes me 3 hours to get to my collage as well, but lucky I love long bus rides(great place to sleep or a good time to get some drawing done X3).
I'm not a great sports fan, but everyone loves football in my family. Never heard of "Australian football" so far, but from what I found on it it looks alot like the british rugby. At least it looks like that to me.
Yeah the one thing I LOVED about my summer jobs was that we sleep at my grandma's house and that small town has so few lights at night if the moon is up it's almost as bright as in the day cuz of it. Sometimes I forget aboot myself and stare at the milky way for too long in the cold with only my pajamas on. >.<
Nice, gotta be careful out there right? The most I saw when I was a kid was a single Grass Snake and even that one hid itself right away. XD
An accent never goes away, that's why it's an accent. :D Yeah Europe is always different then other parts of the worl mainly cuz of it's age. We're a bit more crowded, with our old classic buildings and all I think. :)
"Bugger" Hehe, that's just cute. X3 No prob, I'm worse than that sometimes... like now so just talk your heart out if ya like. ;)
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